Action story

Monday 17th November

My Action Writing.

By Honey

The Impossible.

Once upon a time there lived superhero  named Spiderman and he was a brave and strong man, he could shoot webs out of his wrist to catch on to things so he can climb buildings and towers.

The bad ones would always try to get away with a lot of things but Spider-man  would save the world from them. One day that all changed, the bad ones were so powerful that Spider-man couldn’t do anything to stop it on his own. They called all the superheroes to come and help the world from being destroyed from the bad people, (also known as the killers.)

Captain america, hulk and Iron man came to help Spider-man out. They all tried to destroy the huge plane that was shooting out fire, they all kept going and never gave up. They all got hurt and they were covered in dirt and smoke, they all said that the would trick the killers by covering the widow with smoke while Spiderman and was climbing up on the airplane with his webs.

Spiderman was distracting him while Captain America was breaking in the plane. Captain America was behind the Captain of Killers trying to hurt him. Spider-man jumped down and stayed with Hulk and Iron man. Hulk told Iron man to go help them so he went and  Captain America was on the floor trying to get up. Iron man got really angry and  he called hulk to come and help out as well. They both got really angry then they started to hurt the  the killer even more.

He almost died because they were hurting, hurting and hurting him, the killer was getting stronger, he almost  pushed Iron man out of the plane but he didn’t because Hulk saved him. Iron man and Hulk kicked him off the air plane so he could die on the city that he destroyed.

The next week the city was being rebuilt because a lot of  towers and buildings were destroyed. They were really surprised that  there was no sign of  the killers anywhere. They waited for a month until there was nothing so they didn’t need to worry about anything and anyone ever again.

They lived happily ever after.

The End

Favourite Animal

 I try to find out how many people like Animals.
Then I found out that the whole class like Animals.

Tally Chart - Siblings

Here is my tally chart about how many Siblings Rm7 has.

Some things about me.

Hi my name is Honey, I go to Glenbrae School and I am 9 years old. I enjoy going to school because I like to learn new things everyday, sometimes I like to learn in my own time. I like to learn in my own time and at school because I want to reach new higher life goals and reach higher life goals. I want to achieve more goals in learning and life so I can live a good life, have a job and a house. I will try my hardest to achieve more goals to have a good life and education. I want to learn new things every day so I can be better at what I do in learning. I love to learn new things everyday no matter what. I love to play keyboard/piano in my own time sometimes, I love listening to music because it helps me focus and it always helps me sometimes. I like to go play games when I finish my work, I like to listen to music as well after I have finished my work. I like to go on Pixect and Webcam toy because I like to take selfies in my own time when I am in the mood which is all the time, sort of.

Reading

Research reading

WALT - use illustrations to understand the story

A bit of a blow by David Hill

Response activities	Create a spelling list for a buddy
Response activity 1. Background information. Prediction. Look at the title of the story and the first picture. What do you think this story is about? I think  that it’s about a tornado that just hit a house and made a hole in the roof and  destroyed everything. What do you see in the first picture. List as many as possible and see if your friends can see more than you. A doll, a hole in the roof, two books, a red tarpaulin, toy train tracks, a broken wire, two little trains,  little and big puzzle pieces, windows, crayons.	Spelling words weather Saturday found drumming cosy inside
Response activity 2. Learn What time did he wake up? He woke up at 3:25 a.m Why did he wake up? He heard a loud noise. What did he mean by something was different? The wind was moaning, the  rain  was drumming the roof. The weather was not calm anymore. What does he mean by ‘the night outside seemed to be holding its breath’? because there was no wind or breeze, everything was still. What does stubbed my toe on a chair mean? Its when you bump your toe into a leg of a chair then your toe starts bleeding. Was a train coming to his house? No, fierce wind just sounded like  a train. What damage has been caused in page 20? A tornado had happened and all the street lights didn’t work. Broken windows, all the things in the house were fallen and broken and holes on the roof Who arrived to help and what did they do? The police came to the scene for helping the residents and the firemen helped seal the roofs of houses and schools. Look at the pictures on page 20 and 21 what can you say to describe these pictures? Page 20 is describing the neighbours screaming and others gone there for help, Page 21 is firemen helping the people whose houses were destroyed during the tornado. The other picture on page 21 is a house that has been destroyed.	Spelling words next electricity window footpass concrete tornado weren’t shocked frightened
Response activity 3. Critical thinking Take a picture of all the pictures in the story and write a description for each picture. Here is a photo of a house that a tornado that has just hit, everything is a mess and it has destroyed almost everything. There is a hole in the roof but you can’t really see it. There are toys and other things everywhere, some are books.	Spelling words Scientists dropped paddock trampoline houses thunderstorm
Response activity 4. Share Share activity 3 on your class blog. Write a short summary about why pictures are useful to understand stories	Spelling words plughole tornadoes strike collapsed driven exploded